rough draft

• .Kiberia is a good place to live if you need to earn 1 dollar a day 
• . slums is a place that you go to save money 
• . slums are bad because they don't have water to drink, there are not many doctors and there is alot of people in the slums.
• .Many people in the slums died because they drinked dirty water
•  people in the slums do not have accesses to clean water. not all the slums have access to to safe drinking water.c.If you don't have clean water it is bad for youwithout good doctors you can get sick there are no good doctors in the slums many people die.
• without the doctors people will get diseases and it will spread 
• There are many people in the slums It is so crowded!. there are a lot  of people in the slums theres not much roomsThe overall is important
• .kiberia is a good place to live if you win 1 dollar a day 
• .slums are bad because they dont have water to drink, there are not many doctors and there is alot ofpeople in the slums.
• . what should we do to help them